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The feelings remain incased
Even after the dreams fade
Hit him with a rejected mace
He will still love your face cut
His heart with a obsidian blade
It will always bleed with your
Soundgarden on his lips rock
Him gently forever in your cradle
Wings He will love you sweetly kept
clean his heart cramped and locked
He still has is beautiful

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