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To have you hold like you used to...
To have your lips brush my skin...
To have you touch me like you did...
To feel the love deep within...
To see your sweet smile again...
To hear your tender voice...
To give you my surrender...
When you really left no choice...
To go to the places with memory...
To walk with you in hand...
To have to say no words...
And you would fully understand...
To change the thing's I've done...
I wouldn't, even for one day...
But if the choices were to have differed...
Would I still feel this way...?



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by man eating maniac

what to say?
This is perfect. It feels like it's within a different reality...separate, and more elegant because it is.

hfox9er.

( Posted by: hfox9er [Member] On: July 20, 2003 )

thanks!
you have made this woman very happy, just what i needed on a monday morning!

( Posted by: man eating maniac [Member] On: July 21, 2003 )





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