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As best as you could possibly prepare, you plan the future amidst crumbling choices.
Meanwhile, the world relies on you to get the job done.
When pressures make you strain to stand,
you must step away,
slow life’s pace,
relax,
just,
breathe…



note: This is actually a reverse fibonacci. The first line has the same number of syllables as the next two lines and continues in this manner.

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The quickest way for me to learn something new is to first understand why I'd like to learn it.


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The following comments are for "VACATION, ATLAS"
by poeteye

You constantly surprise me Jim!
Way to go Jim!

I don't know an original Finbonacci never mind a reverse one!! Shows to go I have a long way to go yet in the literary sense!

You DO keep growing though, don't you!

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: December 19, 2014 )

Super
Really good- clever.

I'm with Bea, I've got a long way to go!

Good stuff, this.

Abel

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: December 19, 2014 )

fibonacci gracie
Thank you guys. You've got me blushing (gawrsh!).

( Posted by: poeteye [Member] On: December 22, 2014 )





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