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That time of year
time to pretend
with tinsel & trees

Anagrams could deceive
Coke or Fanta
who made Santa

It wasn’t me
if Satan were here
could he be Deceived?

A garden of fauna
waters crystal clear
2014 Not this year

For all is wasted
The whole Intention
The Garden That Pleased

Did I mention
The birds & the bees
Oceans of Rubbish

Consumables
from you and me
could only be

So Blatantly
Shoved in Gods Face
Total Disgrace

Not so proud
to be a part
of the human race

I know a place
Hidden from many

If only they knew
they’ll find it Uncanny…


------
poetricky


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