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Thinking of you
I know your Blue
sun is shining

yet the Rain
blows through
Sunny Days

no Joy all haze

Look at the Days many to come
when we meet will it feel like
Life's Just Begun?

Time for Fun

Stormy Days Slips away
no more Grey
All your Days

Turn to Shine
All those thoughts
Washed Behind

Begins to unfold
Clearing your mind Days untold

Now All’s New Just me and you
Kisses Hugs Tight Squeeze warm Gentle Smile

Sounds like a Fairy Tale

Gone Wild!


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