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wonder why?
I torment myself

in my life
gone bye
tried to comply

with love nature
the blue sky
the shining sun

Birds that fly
oceans so deep
another rolling wave

every step taken
closer to the grave
all’s forsaken

in this world they made
not my intention
man’s invention

getting in the way
slavery is the word

instead they say
going to Work today…

End of the week
will get my pay
need to rest

No time for play
Is It Really meant to be this way…


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poetricky


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The following comments are for "Another rolling wave"
by zeus

Prone to Rip and Roar
If I had a choice
between...
twiddling my thumbs and tiddlywinks
I'd take a cab to rehab

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: November 29, 2014 )

Rehab
don't think there's is a Rehab to Cater for this situation...

I know Asylums do'

Could Always Start One,
A Rehab that is.

( Posted by: zeus [Member] On: November 29, 2014 )

No Whitecoats for Me
Sure...
I belong in a straight-jacket...
if I could just find a suitable shrink

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: November 29, 2014 )





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