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A Life of tacky Webs
Tightly spun

Thoughts in your Head
Nothing Undone

All the same
Tic goes the clock
as you slowly rot

Into a world
of days best forgot
who knows the way...

Each day best not to say
Put on a smile it all away
Sway to and fro just let go

Thoughts in your head'

Mounting dread
Singing Birds now all dead?

Music no more?
Final call?

Reincarnation my only fear
If only we could break
Through the Atmosphere...


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The following comments are for "Tacky Webs "
by Zeus

Makin' Meals Out'a Maggots
We are merely meat for maggots!
Or so they say!
I know a man...
who took his bones with him!
He's still alive today!

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: November 29, 2014 )

My Chemical Romance the Band wrote a song very fitting to your comment... Mama were ment for the flys :)
All the Best

( Posted by: Zeus [Member] On: December 25, 2014 )

Flesh and Bone yes dose pose a minor problem...

( Posted by: Zeus [Member] On: December 25, 2014 )

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