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A poem for you
thinking of two
what should we do

give it all up hope for good luck?
in another land with a strange man?
you've never met

Will he match your etiquette ?
Take away thoughts...

make your forget?
The desire to light
Your next cigarette?

Mystify you talk with no words
look in your eyes all can be heard
A trickle of love sounds so absurd

full of Broken Dreams
lost through seams
of fear and doubt

giving it all up
Make it or Break it...

Its the final Cut


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The following comments are for "Final Cut"
by Zeus

Don't Thread On Me
The seam that runs
through Fear and Doubt...
is needled by the threader

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: November 27, 2014 )

Ayah Yes so true
your comments are so Refreshing
Thank you

( Posted by: Zeus [Member] On: November 27, 2014 )

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