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There was a little boy who lived in the land of Oz
At the age of three daydreams so free never ending

So he thought it was
Just a Dream'

All he seen buildings wires
Cars and all didn't seem to fit the picture
at all...

Got a little restless by the time he was in school
4 years old kindergarten no more day dreams in a room full of fools
Adults and children somehow alike

He felt his life was a poison spike
stuck inside his head

coming from words that they proudly said,

You will go to hell if your not a good boy
Santa won’t bring you one single toy

You will burn for ever
With all the sinners and the like
Started thinking there are no winners

The daydream turns to Poison splinters
Darkness fills the night

Everything's aright

He knew without the Dark
You will never see the Light


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