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Jameson
you’ve tallied
my days
Boy
you’ve
repurposed
my soul

I mangily waited
for you
not knowing that
inside of me
were amenable
roots

my Son
the meaning
of life roars
through your
cells

I am only
your father
but you are
the heir of the sun
Gods dynamo
behind every atom

remember me
whilst in the days
of your kingdom

remember your
mother too

remember your sister
and the earth
she spawns

remember
remember

for if we all
should die
and only one
of us live

son of mine

let
it
be
you




------
"Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead." — Charles Bukowski


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by pablowilliams

Powerul Stuff Abel!!
I hope you frame this for your son to refer to all his life...and especially beyond yours...attesting to your love for him. I wish every child started out in life with such a powerful affirmation of parental love...there would be no problem children!

I only have one question...have you done likewise for your daughter? I certainly hope so! Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned (no matter how old she is! lol

Much love,
Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: November 9, 2014 )

Correct your profile, Abel?
In your profile here, you say you are uneducated. From your poetry, this is obviously not true. It would be more accurate to say that you are self-educated, perhaps. Or maybe we should all strive to uneducate ourselves in order to become better poets. Great, evocative and terse writing is your hallmark, and that beats any hallowed halls.

( Posted by: Poeteye [Member] On: January 14, 2015 )





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