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A gallop
Slow-crawls
fashioned

schism perfect
for earths
patrons

voices soar
pulpit-gliding
lacing neophyte
children

truth-birds
lay dead

large rooms
swell with
demon-voicing
glossolalia
snapping

wilted wings
in dry claret

skeletons bear
the earth
holding
asphodels



-revised on 10/26/2014

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"Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead." Charles Bukowski


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The following comments are for "The Church "
by pablowilliams

church of the damned

powerful imagery-excellent word usage-I hear the demons roar and see religious zombies holding flowers and eating their young. - A church for the sanctimonious deluded masses.. great stuff...

my warmest

( Posted by: TheRedCockroach [Member] On: November 6, 2014 )

certain truths
Thank you for the ridiculously high rating. Much appreciated.

I thought you might appreciate this more than most.

You visual is just as poetic.

Much love,

Abel

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: November 7, 2014 )

wonder this fantasy
Great work 'what can I say'

you might like this?

wonder this fantasy

http://www.lit.org/view/53065

( Posted by: Zeus [Member] On: November 27, 2014 )





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