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Celebrating Autumn

Let us enjoy these days of Autumn’s
Glorious hues of red and gold
With leaves echoing a sunset
On branches tall and bold
Soon they will lie shirveled and spent
As winter winds blow cold

Nature is a fickle lover
Who woos then runs away
To court another fancy
That may catch his eye today
Spring and summer loves
Attest to his flighty ways
Now Winter waits expectantly
As she impatiently counts the days

Let us mourn the close of Autumn
But her death is not to be
For her lover will return once more
Another season is yet to be!

Copyright©Beatrice Boyle
(All rights reserved)


------
Grandma Bea


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The following comments are for "Celebrating Autumn"
by Beatrice Boyle

Gem
Beautiful, this.

Fickle love makes for fiery passion the next go-around, eh?

( Posted by: Pablowilliams [Member] On: October 24, 2014 )

I'm Just Drunk Being Here
Throwing 'em down...
one after the other...
Set up another round..!

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: October 25, 2014 )

This Round Is On Me!
Thanks Flame...soo good to see our old friends coming back again...and that you are still here keeping the "flame" alive! Bottom's up! lol


( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: October 26, 2014 )

Drunk
I liked the poem but don't understand the references to drinking? Perhaps it's late and I'm just slow...

Dave

( Posted by: HeRoCoMpLeX [Member] On: November 2, 2014 )

tides of autumn
Beatrice

Those writing bones are as strong as ever... It had a nice breezy autumn flow to it. postcard perfect..

my warmest

( Posted by: TheRedCockroach [Member] On: November 6, 2014 )

Dave:
I think Flame is referring to the quality of the recent spate of poetry being posted by our old friends who have come back to the fold. If I'm wrong, I'm sure she will enlighten us!

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: November 7, 2014 )

Tides of Autumn
Thanks Bob...so nice to see you posting here again!
Seems like old times, doesn't it....only better!!

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: November 7, 2014 )

Autumn
Yes Mother Nature is showing off again he works. Good imagery and flow.

( Posted by: chapter1 [Member] On: November 11, 2014 )

RE: Celebrating Autumn
A lovely piece, beaming with Autumn's array of colored brilliance; loved the view you painted and appreciated its message of the season.

Joe Breunig,
Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory
http://amzn.to/1ffo9YZ

( Posted by: jjbreunig3 [Member] On: November 13, 2014 )

Shades of Autumn
Thanks Christopher...although my autumns have passed...I look forward to the beauty of Winter!

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: November 14, 2014 )

Thanks Joe!
Autumn is my favorite season. It reminds me to savor the beauty of these moments in all their glory...nature's salute to all that has come before...saving the best before the coming of Winter!

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: November 14, 2014 )

Autumn
Very beautiful, Bea!
and so is the poem.

( Posted by: poeteye [Member] On: December 24, 2014 )





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