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motionless
In wait

caverns
not our own

an irksome
cogitation

of a race
not congruent
ousted among
themselves

with just a
glimmer of hope

that I cling to
as I grip the
walls

of this
motionless
vessel


------
"Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead." Charles Bukowski


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The following comments are for "World at large"
by pablowilliams

HELLO ABLE!!
Hi Able...I guess your'e the first of the group to publish again...can the others be far behind?

Love this...shows you are still in the writing '"groove"! Let this be the first of many from you!

Love ya,
Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: October 10, 2014 )

Comrades
Thanks for the vote of confidence. I'm glad to engage once again.

I hope that the others are on their way!

Much love, Bea.

I remain close by.

( Posted by: Pablowilliams [Member] On: October 11, 2014 )





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