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i've been dying to tell you
you already know
i guess i couldn't hide it
very well

just how i feel
my feelings for you
leap out of my soul
from my heart
emitting themselves without my permission
i can't hide it,all though i try

i've been dying to tell you
before things get even more troublesome
than they already are
i sense you looking at me and i look up
to see your eyes,the place i want to be
looking deeper into...you searching deeper into me

i find myself questioning
instead of having faith
even though i know
what will be will be
and i know things seem so impossible
i just have to keep on believing
everything will be
love never comes easy
at least not for me
anything worth having
really having always seems to cost something
i just want to leave and take you with me

everything so simple
really isn't so simple at all

------
ray yorba


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