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I am so excited I met this guy on line and we are going out on a date
Not being the best looking person there is, I guess you could say I am on the homely side
I have seen the picture of this guy, good looking, so nice, I hope in time he will be my fate
Hey, maybe in the future I might become a bride

He is coming here to my home, this very night, so I make sure I look very nice
My hair, my makeup, the atmosphere it self, everything has to be just right
Everything has to be just perfect and precise
Then a knock at my door, nervous, yes, because my suitor is now within my sight.

I answer the door my insides are in knots and the butterflies are in my stomach
There he stands, by my standards, the perfect man
His looks, his demeanor, this man is such a hunk
I invite him in, he remarks, I am pretty, he takes a seat because tonight we have to make a plan.

I offer him some coffee, he excepts, I go into the kitchen, not knowing what the future may hold
Going back into the living room, I find he is not there, he seems to be gone
I just don't understand where he went, certainly not outside, it is so cold
I still don't know I would suffer from the seeds I have sewn.

All of a sudden I hear a noise from my bedroom, being curious, I bravely go to take a look
In the dark I see nothing until, I feel an arm go around my neck, my throat
Then I am thrown on the bed, I know what is going to happen, for answers I don't need a book
He rapes me, but the more I cry, I cry so hard I think in my tears I will float

Totally ignoring my cries and my pleas, when he is finished, a gun at my head, he takes me to the lake outside
On the dock he makes me undress, tying my feet and my hands, no way I can move
The the cold barrel of the gun, I hear a gunshot, and my head is on fire in this I confide
Then with one push, I am in the water, the water so dark, so cold, I am dying, from the lake I will never be removed.

Lanaia Lee

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