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I feel so strange and I don't remember how I got here
I have a massive headache and there seems to be blood running down my face
I am in the woods how I got here still remains very unclear
But here I am it's like I'm stuck between time and space

The wound on my head, how on earth could such a thing happen?
Not being able to remember, just more havoc on my nerves
The only thing I know is I feel so strange, a terrible headache on which I do not want to depend
I don't know what to do, out here all alone, no one out here for them to me to serve.

This place looks so much like a bayou or a swamp
Everywhere I look all I can see is marshy land
I hear what sounds to be an abundance of tree frogs, just adding to my theory of a swamp
This little detour sure wasn't what I had planned.

No one here to rescue me or hear me if I make a plea
I am starting to get afraid not knowing where on Earth that I may be
I just wish from this place I could just flee
But then all my questions are answered from what I see.

A man, someone I don't know, is standing close to me carrying a club in his hand
The club is bloody, I don't know how I know this but it is my blood
I am dead I see my body as it lies in all the water, mud, and sand
He tried to rape me but I said no, enraging him until he saw my life force, my blood.

I will haunt you until justice for me is served or until I can drive you mad
I will make sure you will never have another minute's peace
You thinking you killed me and I should be gone, I should be dead
But no, you took my life, I will haunt you until your life you will release.

Lanaia Lee

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