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i built them
the walls and barriers
i have to take them down

you,you don't have to hide
the hideousness
such beautiful eyes

i can see you
see you for who you really are
in your mind the walls
you've built,blindly
thinking it was the only way
to protect yourself
from every little day

so many of us...kill
ourselves,over foolish tiny things
ohhhh! the embarrassment
it only lasts as long as you want...
it to

you don't have to hide...anymore
the hideousness behind
such beautiful eyes
i see you for who you really are
and the walls can not
keep me out
at all
not at all

take them down
and begin to live
something other than this,depressed....
the voices of the demon
in your head

ray yorba

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