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i close my eyes ,never ever really seeing
your face...feeling\'s not on
the surface,the tragedy is in the heart .
she inspires...the clouds march upon
us like roman soldiers and i don\'t care.
she inspires me.
she takes away every breath.
she emits herself on my very soul,
into my heart...i\'m no longer alone...
she inspires...wait.
i close my eyes ,never ever really seeing
your face...i feel...
the rain bails from the dark spongy
sky into our hair,over our faces,
i know you, heart\'s desire
this flavor of passion i taste ,
i taste it again to be sure my imagination...
wasn\'t playing tricks on me,
she chuckled of all things...
taking my hand\"come on \"
guiding me out of the cool dark rain.
she inspires....
me,to be better than i am

ray yorba

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