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where does my heart go
when im asleep at night
where do my thoughts wander
when you are out of sight

where does the wind go
when it scatters my dreams
where does the sun sink
when the moon brightly beams

where does my soul sleep
when its waiting for you
where do the stars twinkle
when there is morning dew

where does my love go
when its almost dawn
where do the birds sing
when night is so long

my heart
my thoughts
my dreams
my soul
my love
they all go to you.

ARenee





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The following comments are for "Where"
by SinamonAngel

Where indeed
Reads like song lyrics with the 'my heart..." verse serving as a bridge. Needs a chorus.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: July 22, 2014 )





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