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i whisper your name
to my pillow
sure that you can hear me
in your dreams at night

thoughts of you
on the night air
fingers awaiting the day
i will touch you

i blow kisses
upon the wind
safe in the knowledge
they will reach your lips

i await you
in the tender twilight
in the space between
night and sleep
you capture me

ARenee July 14, 2014

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