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Here's the deal:

I've posted 24 parts of this story. People are reading this story. This means YOU if you're reading this.

The problem is there hasn't been a single comment, no rating, no feedback, no nothing, zilch, nada.

So . . . I'll make a deal with you. You don't have to comment or rate or do anything . . . except for one small thing:

In order for ME to stay interested, I need at least SOMEthing in return for my efforts, and here it is:

In order for any more of this story to be posted, at least ONE person must put the following in the comments section:


Yes, you can cut & paste it if you like. What you CAN'T do is copy it with the quotation marks. "squinchtweedledeewee" as it appears above, WITH quotation marks, doesn't count. It MUST appear as squinchtweedledeewee. ONLY squinchtweedledeewee will do.

Secondly, you can't comment. As you're not commenting anyway, this won't be a problem. But if you DO comment, that will be a violation of our "squinchtweedledeewee" agreement, and nothing further will be posted.

So . . . at least one of you must type "squinchtweedledeewee" in the comments section per post- that, and nothing else. Anything else and the story is toast.

I thank you for your kind attention.

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The following comments are for "A pixie for the taking- taking stock"
by gsmonks

Carry on

( Posted by: Thewriterwithnoname [Member] On: November 15, 2014 )

This post had to be viewed 5161 times before anyone responded.

I'm not sure what we can all take away from that.

( Posted by: gsmonks [Member] On: November 22, 2014 )

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