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Your dark energy
weakens your attractiveness
and drives all away.

The quickest way for me to learn something new is to first understand why I'd like to learn it.

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The following comments are for "Lighten Up"
by poeteye

Can Only Be Dispensed in a Proper Container
If I could bottle dark energy
I would trade it...
for stuff

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 27, 2014 )

Properly contained
Traded for stuff,
you would come out ahead.
However, since it came first, maybe they should call it ante-matter.

( Posted by: poeteye [Member] On: June 29, 2014 )

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