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tick tock tick..
we have the pieces
they have time



4-5 June 2014
rwg

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below the subliminal
deep within manipulation
that's where tr^th resides

2 Dec 2011






























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The following comments are for "getting clocked"
by Bobby7L

THEY who have it
I like it. The more I read it the more I see in it.

( Posted by: Poeteye [Member] On: June 12, 2014 )

You Can Bet Your Reese's Pieces
Time...
well-managed...
conquers all

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 13, 2014 )

ISIS, Viet Cong..
Poeteye and awhippingflame,
For looking within, much thanks.

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 14, 2014 )

Spanning time
Who needs a clock, when we have all the time in the world.

Enjoyed.

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: October 5, 2014 )

ISIS and Taliban
Abel,
molto grazie

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: October 9, 2014 )





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