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your words subdued
your voice soundless
do you love me?
I do no know
the edge of reason
not within my grasp
mind racing toward
the finish line
with no medals
to show for it
only silence
I lack understanding
do you Care?
do i matter?
mind wandering every where
and no where too
soul screaming
do you see me?
my love being suppressed
and restrained
careful to speak
not of love
its killing me
i cant be me
with you
a shadow of what
i am capable of
you are still
unwavering in your mood
mysterious and methodical
stripping me of myself
do you like that?
are you aware?
release me back
into my world
of beauty and adornment
i am no ones prisoner
you can not tame
a butterfly.

A Renee
March 20, 2014

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