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You

The feeling of you
lasting
on my skin
deep into the night
I pray
the feeling
will never fade.

The thoughts of you
bright
in my mind
like the morning sun
I long
for your light
to stay forever

The caress of you
warm
on my face
passionate like fire
i dream
of the day
you are real.

Adele Renee
May 1, 2014



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