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running bird
penless offering
flying fish


9 April 2014
rwg

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below the subliminal
deep within manipulation
that's where tr^th resides

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The following comments are for "sandscript"
by Bobby7L

Setting sun
Bobby, normally your short stuff goes over my head, but this one gave me a quick glimpse of a setting sun struggling against the tide. I'm probably way off the mark (nothing new) but poetry is subjective, right?

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: April 21, 2014 )

beachphrastic
clearly..

molte grazie

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: April 22, 2014 )





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