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What was there to slow cosmic inflation,
which occurred shortly after the Big Bang?
Nothing obstructed this fomentation,
which from an infinitely dense point sprang.

The claim is expansion somehow reduced
itís speed the second after Creation,
yet through observation itís been deduced
thereís still a speed limit violation.

As though this were viewed -- aloof and astute --
some claim the cosmos first increased its size,
from sub-atomic limit to grapefruit,
then paused, allowing heat to equalize.

But no one can say what put on the brake
and then released it for the heavenís sake.

The quickest way for me to learn something new is to first understand why I'd like to learn it.

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The following comments are for "DARK DRIVER"
by poeteye

The Perfect Storm!
Was it a perfect storm that created earth...possibly...but if it was...guess who was pushing the buttons my friend!

Another good one James!

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: March 29, 2014 )

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