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just past three
kimchi and beet fries
train whistles

19 February 2014

below the subliminal
deep within manipulation
that's where tr^th resides

2 Dec 2011

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The following comments are for "not quite awake "
by Bobby7L

Tossing & Turning!
Can't sleep? The traub whistle is bad enough..but kimchi and beef fries???? lol

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: March 16, 2014 )

"beet fries"

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: March 18, 2014 )

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