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Winters Dream

When I wake up in the morning
The winter frost falls upon me
Being without you feels so ice cold
I shiver as i get up from my dream filled sleep
I worry that you will have gone
if I take my head off my pillow

My heart is in your palms my love
I have given it to you
So you can feel every single pulse of me
Though life is trying to break it,
Please hold my heart gently
Hold it close, so i can dream a bit longer

A Renee
March 5, 2014


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