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Fallen from the tree.

Season of the end.

Once on a green limb.

Life was new and slim.

Now the end calls.

Fall, winter, HARVEST BALL.

OLD LEAF on the ground.

What was that sound.


2/19/2014
JOE POEWHIT

JESUS SAVES

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SCRATCHES ON THE PAGE,
MAKING NOISE


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by poewhit

The Last Leaf!
Sounds like my life James. At 86, the last few leaves are hanging on for dear life! lol

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: February 25, 2014 )

last leaf
I saw a leaf and got inspired to write. 86 catching up, keep he spirit up.

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: February 26, 2014 )





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