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The electric screen on which I type, the soft keyboards of the new. You and I have been quite the distance of late. There is of great volumes to share since we have interlocked light waves and key stroking sounds into the night. A different computer, a different perspective, a new view indeed my fellow reader. We... been a far of late, but of means of a cock roach filled subway platform to a seagull shit filled walkway. Bridges rise up for a wealthy business owner as to streets and blocks close for a dignitary. The worlds between two places create a beyond lost for society in a whole context of realism. When we were close, my pen wrote on trains, ferries, and back of vans traveling to the Hamptons. My spark of passion for expression was of a nuclear power plant powering half of Montana. The ideas were so vivid, fresh and cultivated to the senses. Everything seemed planned, thought out, and driven like a whore earning ten dollars a blow job. The burning flame had warn out like a really bad kid rock song amongst the philistine society. In the great state of michigan one can only realize that my time is so much more presence than once thought of, I learned that when I am alone and bored that I then find useless self loathing activities to keep my my mind active thus creating a sense of laziness. I then proceeded to learn a bit about everything only to cope with the diverse “highly passionate trite individuals”.

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by NucleusFire

Thank You
Thank You for reading! I have been writing quite a bit lately but not posting,Working on getting a full series together and be amore adult. it will fail, so this comment is in existence.

( Posted by: NucleusFire [Member] On: October 4, 2016 )

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