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so you're unable to see beautiful for it's beauty
unless your code of rules apply to it.
a flower seed breaks out of the soil
is it not still a flower or is it only so in full bloom?
you feel something amazing in your being like i do ,every time
we meet...ignore it and say nothing...you feel it too?your heart
tearing at your chest,wanting to leap out emotionally....i love you,
whimpers out under your breath.I heard it even so you say ah nothing...
in side ,under your flesh I LOVE YOU!HEART POUNDING ..FOOLISHLY DESIRING
TO SCREAM IT OUT FROM OUR VERY SOULS...I KNOW YOU FEEL THE SAME YOUR
EYES GIVE YOU AWAY.i will wait for you,to notice the stem growing
with in.i love you too


------
ray yorba


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