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Take me down quiet side
where is no noise of quiet lies
Where words are meant when words are said
and quiet truth is loud instead.
Hearts beat true in promise kept
words are said when words are meant.
Holding the soul on tip of tongue
rest in that what said is done.
Lies of beauty soft sweet places
distort at last such pleasant faces.

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