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Just stop thinking about it already,
and leave that Schrödinger's poor cat alone:
You’ve made it go mentally unsteady.
The experiment’s value’s overblown.

None of us is able to step outside
of observation and what is observed.
When boxed in like that, his cat gets wide-eyed
and well aware of which fate it is served.

Experiments like this are mean, so stop,
not just because it’s so cruel, though it’s that,
but, as experiments go, it’s a flop
since there is nothing indeterminate
established by trapping it like a rat.
Stop thinking-up deathtraps for his poor cat.

The quickest way for me to learn something new is to first understand why I'd like to learn it.

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