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A spring of Hope in your Heart
Thoughts of Us Will Be not dark

Your hand in mine
touch your soul

The look in your Eyes
We will never grow old

our flesh may pass`
in many years

Our Spirits will Fly
Without any Tears

------
poetricky


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The following comments are for "Turning the Key"
by Zeus

There's Hope on the Ropes
Hope is a savior...
The key to strength

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: January 21, 2014 )





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