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the soul
needeth bread
giveth prayer
i said and
it shall
be fed

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The following comments are for "Giveth Prayer I Said"
by FireFly747

Not enough!
The poem is not enough for me to totally to understand it. To short!
I understand most of it but it needs to be longer. the writing is good.

( Posted by: louiemary [Member] On: December 21, 2013 )

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