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fractured poppy

poppy! the park from my window's adorably popping
the fall, it's alarming full autumn
the trees glistening, gleaning
the sun's growing shine losing them into being
and the leaves are unfailingly dropping
we shoe them and the rustle
abouting and a'whying
makes us think and so we doubt
nature's bounty, it pops and percolates
death is a beautiful thing, our grace
no less
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J


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