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Gorgeous is
Your face
When softened
By the glow
Of the moon

The blue hues
Dance upon
Your pristine
Fine raven
Hair

I get lost
Mindlessly
But gracefully
Delicately
I move away
A strand

A cobweb
Gently floats
By in the
Air

From in front
Of your eyes
Do they gleam
So beautifully

The back of
My hand
I tenderly
Brush across
Your cheeks

Softly I kiss
Your pretty lips
Tasting your
Tongue sweet
Like strawberry
Cream

Your beauty
Is but like
A gossamer
Dream



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