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There's no film of the grassy knoll
near Hinken's Creek,
where the neighbor girl's shoe and foot
were pierced by a gig.

We carried her home,
fearing the commission of parents
would find us guilty.

We were not communists,
merely comrades,

sent to our rooms,
each awaiting a judge
returning from his place of business.

Would it be the belt?
No baseball or bikes?

Our conspiracies
had only been with ourselves,
not against each other.

There were tears
through admonishments,
before being banished.


I read "War and Peace."

..got Beatled

and Stoned.


6 October 2013
rwg

------
below the subliminal
deep within manipulation
that's where tr^th resides

2 Dec 2011






























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The following comments are for "After the Coup"
by Bobby7L

Bobby's Cameo
Love this Bobby...lived this with MY sons!!

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: October 12, 2013 )

Bea back..
grazie

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: October 18, 2013 )

Great scenery
I love when I can drift back and relive some of my life through the eyes of a good poet.

Nice vision.

BW

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: October 31, 2013 )

post coup
thank you, Brian

SirEdwin,
extravagant rating noted

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: November 1, 2013 )





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