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i think about now, y'know it's good you know
i think 'bout my life, it's a sitcom. it's a tv show
what do i think about, what do i think come's next?
read all about it, read the fucking text
read it now, you bastard
it's a fucking disaster
no, it's not. it's a garden
so sorry, beg you pardon


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J


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The following comments are for "garden"
by mercer102

Me Tarzan and You Are Definitely Jane
Life is a garden for the playful...
Passion swings on a vine

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: October 12, 2013 )





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