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There are readers there are writers
even some that canít do either
Some will turn up everywhere
no chance to take a breather

There are watchers there are voyeurs
with everything in between
They will know most all you do
yet still remain unseen

There are critics there is silence
most keep it to themselves
Some think the writing just appears
itís written by the elves

Some are alive some not so much
lotís live lives in their head
Then have no fear for I am here
but not sure if youíre dead


If you listen to me long enough I can lower your IQ

I came into this world with nothing,
through careful management I've got most of it left.

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The following comments are for "Deadoralive"
by Fairplay

Still Alive
I'm still alive but rarely get on to Lit nowadays. Nice to see you haven't lost your powers of observation/perception!

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: October 7, 2013 )


Mine eyes have seen the Glory of the Coming of the Word
Some might say I am silly but it's them that are absurd
I live my life just how I wish I don't hide and can be Heard

And Life goes rolling on..... Tra La

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: October 9, 2013 )


Seems there is me and you Ivor I just pinched myself just to check I am awakee

Happy to report that I am also very much alive and leading a cracking life in Beautifull British Columbia.

Reckon all those girls and guys that entertained us for many years must have moved on to more gainfull employment

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: January 21, 2014 )

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