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How do you see a god made you and me

one must wonder this fantasay

dose one ponder concept reality

how would you know who Runs the best show

words and actions crosses they bear

for it is written only but a fool

shall bear the cross yet not bear good fruit

in your representation of the god you serve

or the wrath that comes with the gods you made

the path you paved lined with things born from man

you screem and shout i dont understand the god you made

Just wont` Save You

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poetricky


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