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where did you find it
we found it in a bathtub
when did you find it
we found it today
was it your bathtub, just give up
was it in the bathtub, bub?
i can't quite say
can't or won't, just behave

i've given up
he'll lawyer up
now he won't talk
let's give it to him broadside
i'll be peter falk
you be lenny from homicide
you mean jerry orbach?
that's who i mean, lance
well this'll make him talk
wait'll he sees me dance
i'll wear 'im out until he falls
(ever see me in 'guys & dolls'?)

k, you damn freako
fess up before we
have to get sick & tawdry
it's just you & me now
(you ever see me on broadway?)

alright ok! you got your way
i'm so sorry, mr. orbach
i killed her on the great white way
great, now there's the door, fuck


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