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she recognizes
the difference in my breath:
drink in her absence


--R.K.Singh

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R K Singh


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by R.K.Singh

Want more
I wanted more, Yea did she smell the booze? Smell the other girls Pussy? Smell something more than a click and three line?

( Posted by: NucleusFire [Member] On: August 25, 2013 )





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