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oh, this dog-&-pony show
there's the shore, and there i row
sorry you fell overboard
but the storm is heading toward
where i want to go
and where i want to be
this ain't the staten ferry
and where i want's not very
far from where i see
my bad, your starry death at sea
no one knew that you were here with me
nobody'd known that you were
where you shouldn't be
you quibbled 'bout
my seamanship
now let's see your corpse a-drip
now let's see who has a doubt
'bout who can navigate
your dreams, your life, your wishes
nibbled by the fishes
we'll see who has the clout
it started out as such a lovely date


------
J


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