Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search

Average Rating

(0 votes)

You must login to vote

Same story
Over and over.
Born without a spoon.
Walked alone along the road.
Got help from nobody.
Struggled until success
and today, a hero.

Same people
year after year
All share same story
Talk less about missed chances.
Denounce their helpers.
Forgot they were opportunists.
Legends; same biography


Related Items


The following comments are for "Rags to Riches"
by zaza

Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.