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How come you shiver before rain?
You get the blanket before cold.
The lightening eclipses your sight,
then the thunder on your drums.
You begin to seek for help
because the day turned night.

When its over your troubled head
it doesn't mean it wouldn't shift.
Of course, it will rain on you much
and soak even your bones down
But here is a vital secret;
After the rain comes sunshine.

You will never remember again.
The sun will dry up your tears.
When you see a dark cloud,
Get prepared for rain and cold
But be assured of the end;
A dark cloud for a bright day.


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The following comments are for "When You See A Dark Cloud"
by zaza

When you See a Dark Cloud
A meaningful optimistic poem
That lifts our spirit finely
Giving hope, courage and guts
A must for modern tough days.


( Posted by: mvvenkataraman [Member] On: August 6, 2013 )

I appreciate

( Posted by: zaza [Member] On: August 7, 2013 )

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