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Yesterday, under the sun,
I used a well shaped stick
to draw a staircase that
contain steps. Step by step.

Below my shadow identified
each step of my life vividly
painted a picture of it on
the step i sketched on sand.

Life at times shows
a picture different from you
that great artwork. That is fate.
But make a sketch. That is plan.

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oomph!


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