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Invitation from: The Addict

I shatter glass cutting wings. I disregard the
scattered shards. I embrace silence absolute. I
dangle exquisite from my web. Lay on broken glass
with me. Feel talon tearing flesh. Taste mountain
mist on eager tongue. Inhale the curling smoke.
Caress the creeping vine.

Reply to: The Addict

When shattered glass is disregarded
and silence absolute.
When mountain mist mingles
with wisps of rising smoke.
Think of weeping willows
on river banks of mud.
Think of lifeless corpses
bloated in the sun.

An addict exquisite
hanging by a thread
has cockroach deception
pumping through its head.
Grand illusions
on altars paid in cash
the moral warts on a
French whore's ass.

Echo in the distance
as the cold winds blow.
Purple lips are muted
cries from down below,
watch out shooters
there's an under toe,
and water runs deepest

when shattered glass is disregarded
and silence absolute.
When mountain mist mingles
with wisps of rising smoke.
Think of weeping willows
on river banks of mud.
Think of lifeless corpses
bloated in the sun.


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