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‘Great’ Britain?

Us Brits have one thing in common
there's no rich folk that we ever trust,
for they don't give a damn who they're hurting
while striving to fulfil their lust.

We've seen it with our Politicians
our Actors and Police Force as well.
While they spend, Britain sinks in depression
giving everyone else living hell.

It would seem Beer's the only solution,
though drinking it to great excess
puts more bloody tax in their pockets
and does nothing to sort out the mess.

Now I am a real peacefully person
but I'd happily pick up a gun
and murder the bent twisted bastards
who ruin our lives for their fun.

This also applies to the dozens
protected by our BBC,
Hidden by Police, and the Rich Folk,
who let child abusers roam free.

Just what has become of our nation
or as it been always the same.
No wonder we Brits' drown our sorrows
- being drunk is less reason for shame.

Ivor G Davies

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The following comments are for "'Great' Brritain"
by ivordavies

God Save the Queen
I reckon you were using your tab to write this.......

Thank Goodness there is still a "Royal Family" to take ones mind off reality.

Have you noticed how "Rich Folk" tend to hide away and let their henchmen face the real music?

I have my eye on one of those new Bentley SUVs.... but the orders book is full for the next five generations.

Your post reminded me of a couple of poems mum used to recite.....

And the Lord said unto Mosses
All Jews Shall have big Noses

I am assuming that is in relation to "Free Air"

The other one was proof that we were never Racist

God made little Niggers
he made them in the night
Morning came so early
he forgot to paint them white

I took that as a simple explanation as to why we were different colours

Now we have lost the Golliwog of Robertson's Jam
we have to turn our attention elsewhere...

Blame the Rich.... nothing racist about that.

Rich People come in many shapes
many shapes and sizes
Form your own opinion
whatever their disguises
See I was born a wealthy lad
remember well those days
I sure was never hungry
or hung up on a craze

Rich people they are in a queue
the top is hard to guage
some will fall while climbing
then end up in a rage
I just sit at the bottom
look up at the sky
There's nothing much to loose
or make me want to cry

The rich have far too many faults
some kill themselves for greed
While I am quite contented
I have the things I need
A home a wife a comfy bed
I even have the Hoover
To top it all then here I am
in "Beautiful Vancouver"

nb Hoover in this verse is nothing to do with the Big USA Dam it is a Household Product more commonly associated with a Vacuum Cleaner

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: July 24, 2013 )

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